Episode 2: The Fear
The next day, at 4:00 pm
Abhi on call: “Neil! Where
are you? I’m bored out of my mind here.”
Neil: “I told you to stay in
the village. What are you doing there?” (Sarcastic)
Abhi: “I’ve got work on the
farm, you know that.”
Neil: “I’m really not
feeling energetic enough to pick you up from the village today. And Litu’s got
a fever; we got caught in the rain while coming back from that hill.”
Abhi: “Don’t ruin my Sunday,
man!”
Neil: “Alright, fine. I’ll
be there in half an hour.”
After picking up Abhi, they
headed to Litu’s house.
Neil: “Come down!” (On Call)
Litu: “Wait!”
Litu’s mom from the balcony:
“He’s got a fever. He needs to rest.”
Just then, Litu came down
and hopped onto the scooter. “I’ll come soon,” he said.
Abhi took the wheel, Neil
sat in the middle, and Litu squeezed in the back.
“Where to?” they all said
together, bursting into laughter.
“Idiots!” Litu muttered,
shaking his head.
They made their way to a
nearby park with a few snacks and some Coke.
Neil: “Hey! You never sent
me those pictures. What am I supposed to post on Instagram?”
Litu: “Okay, okay! I’ll send
them when I get home.”
Neil: “Fine!”
Abhi: “Hey! Jerks, find me a
job. You guys are all set; what about me?”
Litu: “We’re still not
stable. I’m working on it. And honestly, I don’t even know what’s going on in
his head—whether he’s staying with me or not.” (Pointing at Neil)
Neil: “You’ve got the farm
job, don’t you?”
Abhi: “Ouch! Not funny!”
Neil: “Seriously though, the
farm business might be better than our jobs. Think about it.”
Litu: “I’ve got a program on
Thursday; I need to practice. What a bad time to get sick.”
Neil: “So you’re skipping
the office on Thursday?”
Litu: “I’ll just take a
half-day.”
Abhi: “Leave! Office! I want
to be an office guy.”
Neil: “Be patient. Learn new
skills, add them to your resume. You’ll land something better.”
Litu: “Drop me home! Guys,
I’m really not feeling well. We’ll catch up on Saturday.”
Abhi: “Hey! Neil are you
back with Anku?”
Litu: “What??? Shut Up!”
Neil: “Are you guys’ nuts?”
Litu: "You are hiding something."
Conversation continues ….
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On Saturday,
Right after work, Litu
starts sending the pictures from last Saturday to Neil while riding the bus
home. In a couple of them, there’s a strange black shadow beside Neil on that
red stone. When he looked closer, he noticed that in every picture of Neil from
that day, there’s a shadowy figure right beside him, staring directly into the
camera. Litu couldn’t believe his eyes—his throat went dry, his skin started to
sweat. He’d seen plenty of horror movies, but this time, the fear was real. He
stared at the pictures in shock for a few minutes, then panicked and called
Neil, who, as usual, didn’t answer. After a few attempts, Neil finally picked
up.
Litu: “Are you okay? Where
are you?”
Neil: “I’m out for some
work. I’ll see you tomorrow evening, okay? Bye.” And he hung up.
Litu: “Wait!!!! Hello!!
Idiot!”
Litu to himself: “We are so
FFFFed UP…”
Continue…
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ReplyDeleteGreat job man!!! Things turning dark slowly. Put some dark humour. Aur majaa aayega. Don't come to main so soon. Make it more suspenseful.
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