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Monday, September 9, 2024

The Adventures of Neil and Litu S1:EP4

Episode 4: Heaven

Neil: “Wow! What’s with the smoke? Is this heaven? Am I dead? No! Man, I had plans.”

Litu: “Well, it doesn’t feel like it.”

Neil: “What are you doing in my heaven?”

Litu: “Seriously? That’s your concern? You should be asking if you're dead too!”

Neil: “Are you going to argue in heaven too?”

Litu: “This looks like a movie scene. I didn’t think heaven would be real. And if it is, why does it look like this? How did people know about it?”

Neil: “Maybe they were reborn.”

Litu: “As if I’m going to believe that.”

Neil: “Hey, you believe in heaven but not reincarnation? Hypocrite.”

Litu: “Something’s odd. I feel something at my feet.”

Litu: “Oh shit! Abhi!”

Neil: “He’s here too? This is a perfect reunion!”

Litu: “Shut up and help me. He’s not moving.”

Neil: “His pulse is fine, just unconscious. Slap him!”

Litu: “What??”

Neil: “I think he’s half-alive and half-dead, like Schrödinger’s cat.”

Litu: “Whose cat?”

Neil: “Never mind.”

Neil patted Abhi’s cheek: “Hey! Abhi! Abhi!” 

Litu shouted at the body, “Don’t die on me!”

 

Suddenly, Abhi opened his eyes with a gasp, caught his breath, and muttered, “I... I’m... I’m hungry.” 

Neil: “Welcome aboard in heaven!” and hugged him. 

Litu: “That’s still debatable.” 

Abhi: “What did I miss?” 

Neil: “Earth, my friend! Earth.” 

Litu: “What is this place, actually? It’s all dense smoke and white.” 

Neil: “And fragrant.”

 

The mist slowly began to fade, and the college campus came back into view. The sun set as soon as the mist disappeared. 

Abhi: “It was just mist.”

Litu: “Yeah,” (softly). 

Neil: “Run!” 

Abhi and Litu: “What?” 

Neil: “RUN!!!!”


Walk in heaven

They could feel something closing in, a presence hunting them. Panic surged through their veins as they bolted from the college, heart pounding, feet barely touching the ground. Desperation led them to the old, abandoned shrine, seeking refuge. But as they stepped inside, a strange man with a sinister air emerged from the shadows. His unsettling appearance sent a chill down their spine, forcing them to change course.

Without thinking, they darted into the dark, dense forest, their breath ragged, fear fueling their every step. They threw themselves behind a cluster of jagged stones, trembling as the relentless, bone-chilling roar drew nearer. The sound hovered close, lingering by the rocks, as if whatever was chasing them was just a heartbeat away. And then, suddenly, it faded into the distance.

For what felt like an eternity, they stayed frozen, huddled in place, not daring to move, every nerve on edge. Half an hour passed, but they couldn’t shake the feeling that something was still out there, waiting. 

Neil: “I think it’s gone.” 

Litu: “I think so too.” 

Abhi: “Let’s go.” 

Neil: “Where?” 

Litu: “I don’t think we’ll make it home tonight. Let’s stay here till morning, then leave.” 

Abhi: “We can’t stay in there.” 

Neil: “Guys, we can stay in the shrine.” 

Abhi: “Shrine? Are you out of your mind?” 

Litu: “No, I think we’d rather deal with that man than this creature.” 

Neil: “Finally, you agree on one thing.” 

Abhi: “Okay, but we’ll scope it out first and then talk to the man.” 

Neil: “Fine by me.” 

Litu: “Let’s go.”

 

Outside the shrine, Neil circled the perimeter, while Litu found a cave-like storeroom. There was no sign of the man. 

Neil: “This place is mysterious. I can’t find that guy.” 

Abhi: “Me neither.” 

Litu: “Same here. But I found a cave. It’s more like a storeroom; we can stay there.” 

Abhi: “Shall we light a fire?” 

Litu: “Are you an idiot? We almost died, we have no idea what’s after us, and you want a fire?” 

Abhi: “If you’ve got any bright ideas, share them. No need to get mad at me.” 

Neil: “Abhi, I’m hungry too. Do you have anything?” 

Abhi: “Of course, darling.” 

Neil: “Seriously?” 

Abhi: “Yeah, I’ve got chips and bread.” 

Neil: “Nice!” 

Litu: “Fine, let’s make a fire.” 

Abhi: “There you go!”

 

 

To be continued...

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